Comments on: Friday Fluff: 5-7-5

By: fillyjonk

fillyjonk — Mon, 19 May 2008 17:27:46 +0000

Oh man, I just got
“You’re not fat”-ed. Time for
Teachable Moment!

By: shinobi42

shinobi42 — Mon, 19 May 2008 16:41:35 +0000

Weddings suck so much
almost fall asleep standing
I want my life back.

By: mccn

mccn — Mon, 19 May 2008 16:06:59 +0000

shopping: my life’s bane
rather do anything else
(unless it’s for books)

By: car

car — Mon, 19 May 2008 00:28:49 +0000

Don’t want to do stuff
Especially grocery store
I hate Wal-Mart trips

By: Roberta Lipp

Roberta Lipp — Sun, 18 May 2008 22:22:38 +0000

Sorry I was late
For my opportunity
To add a haiku

I am quite a fan
Of expressing thoughts tightly
In 5-7-5

It’s sad how I have
Nothing of any value
Regarding topics

By: hejira

hejira — Sun, 18 May 2008 21:43:09 +0000

a brand new garden
meeting with a soft spring rain
what perfect timing

By: Caitlin

Caitlin — Sun, 18 May 2008 11:35:44 +0000

Epiphenomena,

Probably thinking
in the abstract. Doesn’t get
it’s about people.

Much harder, I find,
to say to my face: you don’t
deserve happiness.

By: raven

raven — Sun, 18 May 2008 10:18:10 +0000

tonight i will wear
my wedding ring to sleep in
i miss my husband

only three more days
until i fly to see him
and then fireworks!

By: waven

waven — Sat, 17 May 2008 23:02:11 +0000

hard soles, concrete floors,
a lonely shift, twelve long hours;
oh my aching feet.
- – – – – – – – – – – -
cold today, with rain,
a dreary springtime drizzle.
how i miss the sun.
- – – – – – – – – – – -
letter by ketter,
words fall like cherry blossoms
soft as morning mist.

[ come on, someone had to throw in some cherry blososms... ]

By: Epiphenomena

Epiphenomena — Sat, 17 May 2008 22:59:54 +0000

My beloved Dad
opposes gay marriage. Why?
Illogical bilge.

Surprise of my life.
Inconsistent with all his
values and mores. Grrr.